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I left the light on
in case you changed
your mind. I wouldn’t
want you to fall
and hurt yourself
plus I know how
you hate the dark.
I hoped you would
see the light and
know I still care.

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Written by burrben

June 11, 2011 at 12:56 pm

Posted in poetry

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  1. Love the imagery. Sweet, too. Hope she see the light. . .
    http://pamanner.wordpress.com/2011/10/03/source/

    Pamanner

    October 3, 2011 at 7:52 pm

  2. That was wonderful, I truly loved every line.

    RoughWaterJohn

    October 3, 2011 at 8:55 pm

  3. love it.

    how thoughtful .

    love is light.

    Morning

    October 5, 2011 at 2:19 pm

  4. Oh… how one waits for the love to fall in place… the right place in the heart…

    Thanks for sharing. Look forward to your entry in the coming poetry picnic week 8 theme “Friends, relationship… ”

    Shashi

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/10/whispers-love-and-loss-butterfly.html

    Shashi (@VerseEveryDay)

    October 7, 2011 at 6:43 am


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