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heartbreak (20)

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you threatened
to leave
constantly.
these words
never sounded
real.
my eyes
watched you
walk.
heartbeat growing
slightly each
moment
eventually jumping
up my
throat,
choking out
any possible
hope.

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Written by burrben

April 6, 2011 at 12:26 pm

Posted in poetry

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6 Responses

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  1. Another great post. Thanks for sharing this. Spending time to sit down writing short stories and poems is something I truly enjoy in life.

    A Great Day for Spring – Poem

    easylifestyles

    April 6, 2011 at 1:39 pm

  2. Excellent poem. Thank you for sharing!

    Kay Salady

    April 7, 2011 at 9:12 pm

  3. …simple but very expressive words….great write!

    eclipseofthemoon

    April 12, 2011 at 11:01 am

  4. join poets rally.
    make poetic friends, get encouragements via awards.

    come on in, the collection is to be closed within 25 hours.

    cheers.

    hope to see you in ASAP…..

    your talent rocks.

    visit me now………….

    Jingle

    April 13, 2011 at 2:24 pm

  5. Ouch…..
    I can feel your pain too. 😦

    silverdegene

    April 14, 2011 at 9:30 am


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