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meaningless words (49)

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quiet violence
sits low
in the
dark corner
waiting while
your mind
travels beyond
reasonable limits
wishing dreams
were closer
than air

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Written by burrben

March 23, 2011 at 6:25 pm

Posted in poetry

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  1. “wishing dreams were closer than air.”

    very nice.

    Layla Torres Bool

    March 23, 2011 at 6:31 pm

  2. love it..
    beautiful words..

    Jingle

    March 24, 2011 at 4:32 pm

  3. Brilliantly therapeutic
    to share
    the notion
    that others
    have not
    been alone
    in their
    dark corners
    and this
    is not
    meaningless.

    Kay Salady

    March 25, 2011 at 3:15 pm

  4. Lovely Poetry
    Here’s Mine STUFF

    HAPPY RALLY !!

    ashbeezone

    March 26, 2011 at 10:05 am

  5. Lovely … “dreams closer than air” – appreciate that.

    Happy Rally days …

    Jamie Dedes

    March 27, 2011 at 5:33 pm


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